Your script for teaching about the planets in English is engaging and informative! Here’s a polished version with some minor adjustments for clarity and flow:
Hey, everybody, TooWhite here to teach you English
大家好， 欢迎来到太白教你学英语
So today, I want to talk about the planets
所以今天，我想谈谈行星
And I want to talk about the planets
我想谈谈行星
Because my wife never remembers the names of the planets
因为我妻子从来不记得行星的名字
She also never remembers the Chinese names of the planets
她也不记得这些行星的中文名字
So, let's get started
我们开始吧
Our first one: Mercury
我们的第一个，水星
It is the smallest of the planets
它是行星中最小的
And the closest to the sun
离太阳最近的
And our second one: Venus
我们的第二个，金星
So, Venus is the hottest planet in the solar system
金星是太阳系中最热的行星
And it rotates in the opposite direction
它朝相反的方向旋转
From all the other planets
与所有其他行星不同
So, on Earth, the sun rises in the east
在地球上，太阳从东方升起
And sets in the west
在西方落下
On Venus, it rises in the west
在金星上，它从西边升起
And sets in the east
然后在东方落下
So, number 3
3号
Earth
地球
That's our planet
那是我们的星球
So I don't need to talk too much about it
所以我不需要说太多
It's the only planet in our solar system
它是我们太阳系中唯一的行星
That has life on it
上面有生命
And has liquid water
还有液态水
Also, Earth is the densest planet in the solar system
而且，地球是太阳系中密度最大的行星
And the second densest planet is Mercury
第二个密度最大的行星是水星
So now number 4
所以现在4号
Mars
火星
Mars, just like Earth, is in the habitable zone
火星和地球一样，处于可居住区
Which means that it could support life
也就是说它可以维持生命
The problem is that Mars right now
问题是火星现在
Has almost no atmosphere
几乎没有大气
And no water
没有水
Although scientists say
尽管科学家说
Probably billions of years ago
可能是几十亿年前
Mars did have running water
火星上确实有液态水
And much more atmosphere
还有更多的大气
But right now, not anymore
但现在，不再是了
So number five: Jupiter
第五，木星
Jupiter is the largest planet
木星是最大的行星
In the solar system
在太阳系中
If you take all of the other planets
如果你把所有其他行星
And combine them
合在一起
Jupiter would still be bigger
木星仍然会更大
Now Jupiter, because it's the biggest planet
现在木星，因为它是最大的行星
It also has the most moons
它的卫星也最多
It has 79 moons
它有79个卫星
Also, with the Great Red Spot on Jupiter
还有木星上的大红斑
That is actually a storm that has been going on for centuries
那实际上是一场持续了几个世纪的风暴
And it's actually bigger than the entire Earth
它实际上比整个地球还要大
So now number six
所以现在是6号
Saturn
土星
And of course, everybody knows that Saturn is the planet
每个人都知道土星是行星
With the giant rings around it
周围有巨大的环
Those rings are made entirely out of ice
那些环全是冰做的
And other space debris
以及其他太空碎片
Another fun fact about Saturn
关于土星的另一个有趣的事实
Because the pressure there
因为那里的压力
The atmospheric pressure
大气压力
Is so intense
如此强烈
That it actually rains diamonds there
那里真的会下钻石雨
So, literally, diamonds falling from the sky
从字面上来说，就是天上掉下来的钻石
Number seven
七号
Uranus
天王星
It is so far from the sun that it has very, very little light there
它离太阳太远了，那里几乎没有光
Another interesting thing about Uranus
天王星的另一个有趣之处
Is the way that it rotates
是它的旋转方式
So, on Earth, our planet is upright
在地球上，我们的星球是竖直的
With North and South poles
有南北极
But with Uranus, it's tilted on its side
但天王星倾斜在一侧
So North is here
所以北极在这里
South is here
南极在这里
And it rotates like that
它就是这样旋转的
Number eight
八号
Neptune
海王星
Now with Neptune
现在谈谈海王星
It’s very cold
天气非常寒冷
Very dark
非常黑暗
And we first discovered it not by seeing it
我们第一次发现它不是因为看到它
But by using math
而是通过数学计算
We realized that something was pulling
我们意识到有东西在拉扯
A lot of objects
许多物体
Farther away from Uranus and Saturn
远离天王星和土星
So, they actually did some calculations
他们做了一些计算
And eventually figured out where Neptune would be
最终找到了海王星的位置
And using those calculations
通过这些计算
They were able to find it
他们找到了它
So, let’s review one more time
那么，让我们再复习一遍
Mercury
水星
Venus
金星</p
Earth
地球
Mars
火星
Jupiter
木星
Saturn
土星
Uranus
天王星
Neptune
海王星
And that's all for today
今天就到这里
If you learned something new
如果你学到了新的知识
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